up the twisting  
Dagget’s Hill
slate clouds sink 
icy rain pelts
the bass player
appears 
hands me 
her bass
not quite wrapped
huge black plastic
flaps fear 
glue melt
wood warp
strings rip away
stiff fingers 
stretch black film
knots evade
not noticing
the coliseum 
stumbling on the rim
roused by ruckus
i see Kyung-soo 
running leaps two
towering steps a time
youv’e done it
now get on with it
gone
my tumbling word 
clatter on deaf limestone
chastised
finally manage 
knotting
deluge unends
walk on
"slate clouds sink icy rain pelts" will stay with me for some time -- thanks!
ReplyDeleteElizabeth,
ReplyDeleteThanks you for reading my poem and for your response. I needed the lift of being read.