up the twisting
Dagget’s Hill
slate clouds sink
icy rain pelts
the bass player
appears
hands me
her bass
not quite wrapped
huge black plastic
flaps fear
glue melt
wood warp
strings rip away
stiff fingers
stretch black film
knots evade
not noticing
the coliseum
stumbling on the rim
roused by ruckus
i see Kyung-soo
running leaps two
towering steps a time
youv’e done it
now get on with it
gone
my tumbling word
clatter on deaf limestone
chastised
finally manage
knotting
deluge unends
walk on
"slate clouds sink icy rain pelts" will stay with me for some time -- thanks!
ReplyDeleteElizabeth,
ReplyDeleteThanks you for reading my poem and for your response. I needed the lift of being read.